This is my first bonsai I did this year (1 of 2 Hinokis) and first real attempt. I finished wiring the sweeping side and now need to decide if I will keep the upright part to develope or sacrifice. Let me know what you think!

The growth on the left should be cut off. There are two branches that are opposite and one needs to be removed. Then it needs pruning and wiring properly

I did do some trimming after image was taken but did not want to go to crazy.

How can I improve wiring? I have one spot with a space, which I know is not desirable, but otherwise have good contact all around.