After some critique from another forum mentioning the gap in the middle, I decided I can use one of the extra rear branches to create a pad behind the tree so the trunk passes in front. This should help fill the gap and provide a nice backdrop for the trunk itself. I'm going to spend some time creating the virtual but with the branch thickness I would like but for now I quick mocked it up here to show the intended back piece.
Also it was noted that some of the branches look very straight and could use more branching... the orange and purple one in my image actually have couple of branching points early on:
The wired branch in the middle and going up is orange in my virtual, and the wired branch under that is the dark blue/purple one. I think it just doesnt show that well due to some of the leaves and lighting, but I will always be further creating corners in these branches as they go out. Especially the dark red one going to the right in the virtual