I am a little bit at a loss for words. I saw your tree in the first post and thought.. Amazing material. Then I saw the after pictures and I was shocked to see you killed off the left side of the tree, what I would have used for your tree..
I am not sure. If you look at the flow of thetrunk and the deadwood, I would expect the foliage to be more to the left, following the general direction of the tree. As it sits now, I think I would seriously tilt the tree, either as a semi-cascade, or the other direction, bringing the deadwood to the top. I need to sleep on this one.