Hello all,
I have just started my first bonsai with a juniper plant, and so far so good. I have chosen to do an unconventional 'double cascade' with two leading branches on the right hand side.
While onconventional isn't necessarily bad, you should not try it with your first plant. You'll get the result you have now, which is not unconventional, but just strange. It does not work.
I would remove one of the two branches - or probably shorten the top one. Next, I'd tilt the tree to the right, about 45 degrees, to make the left part the top.
The photo shows one side, but I don't think I'm happy with the movement of the first main branch. You'd have to restyle that anyway.
Your wiring needs improvement. You should wire the branch all the way, so you can shape it the way you want it.