Hi. I got a Cedrus and I am thinking of doing some work on it.

I made a draft. I am a starter (<2yrs) and I don't have much bonsai experience and much less in drawing.

The goal here would be to have a defined goal and stick to that, as sometimes I drift over time.

Would you please tell me what you think of it? Be unpleasant if you have to. Here it is.

Thanks!

Good that you ar ethinking of directrions to take, before starting hackjing away. I am a bit at a loss to tell how the sketch relates to the plant you are showing.

Note that cedrus is not the easiest plant to work on (I am in the process of killing one myself).